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Jul 15, 2011 | 9:44 PM EDT
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1.4 MB
1 min 14 sec
4.20 / 5.00

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Rated 4.20 / 5 stars
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Just a little mix tape kind of thing.

Beat- Dear Lord II, Produced by Hi-Fly


I use to dream of things, like being a king
Living free without having my life tied up in strings
Cause a part of me who use to just sit out in the rain
Hoped the rain would come and wash away all of the pain

I try close my eyes and try to picture myself
Picture honeys, countin my money on my mountain of wealth
The perfect life, I've been waiting for while living this hell
But would I still be me without all of my hardships I dealt?

I hate living a life where I can't afford to pay the bills
these chest pains and arthritis build up so much, that it kills.
Turn my back, hope to leave all of my struggles in the pass
But the fact, is having trouble that finds its way back.

And I'm taking every chance I get,
deliberately writing broken wits
Reaching to people who hear this
let em know they're not alone

All the people in this world
all the little boys and girls
Let the world inspire you, in return, inspire the world



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


very good, but ron-exon was right about the ending, but still very good


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Lyrics Great and Beat

Well this ain't bad at all. Just needs a closing to that beat around from 01:09.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


I really enjoyed this.
(+really enjoyed all of them)
(-volume, you were a tad too low)
(-should have added some in the ending)

I truly hope for the best for you and your mother both. You are both in my prayers.


Rated 5 / 5 stars


Love the lyrics mate! I mean there's so many songs like this. People wishing they would make it one day. But since listening to your other songs, I understand this story so well. You deserve it mate!
"deliberately writing broken wits" very nice, haha. People can relate to this sort of stuff mate. Hi-Fly is truly a great producer. And you did a BRILLIANT job on it. Hope you make an album soon. I'll be your first customer!
Rated 5 of 5 and 10 of 10. Make more! Tata!


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Surprise to see it in this section

Good looping man, good rimes, good flo