I like the slightly chromatic sound you have throughout, especially in that opening melody line when it's combined with the interesting rhythm. All in all the piece is vary varied and thus holds my interest throughout. The piano sound is perfectly acceptable, perhaps not perfect but it's nice. The clapping at the end was a nice touch and gave the piece a setting. Good stuff!
Thank you very much, a really constructive review.
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