It was a pretty good song that reminded me of something on the movie Gladiator. But Hans Zimmer you are not. You could benefit from some better synths and samples. Perhaps work on the panning for this song. Other than that I liked it. As well as your other submissions.
Wow, thanks you both ^_^
I'll definetely keep trying, and I noticed a lack of balance in the song as well, so I'll upload the better version soon (same synths though) Thanks for reviewing, too! :D
The voice kinda freaked me out. Try to watch out from having too much going on at once. It is supposed to be ambient, "surrounding on all sides, completely enveloping," but I never felt like I was in the music. I could tell where you were trying to go but it never really worked out. I don't claim to have all the knowledge of how to make an awesome track, but this one seemed to push me away instead of grabing me. Nice try.
Thanks for your review, first of all ^_^
By now I made a second version, and the problems you mentioned should be fixed now, aside from that it's still slightly redundant, but I guess ambient music can get away with that ^-^