Very interesting, and very cool. I dig it! Its like SNES metal xD
The beginning is nice. The good too. It's fitting for what you are trying to portray. when the drums kind of go crazy, it's a bit out of character lol. I like it though. Keep working at mixing =) and mastering, you will get it. I didn't listen to the whole song, but from what I heard, I'm gonna judge it on that.
Sooo, just work on the mixing of this song. Everything else is okay with me.
Keep it up.