yeah yeah its good but...
ok to start i liked it, but i barely noticed that at 0:14 started the kick, power it up a little, also the drums, in music is very important the volume you put to your instruments, a song is a song when everything mix up together giving a good sound, but if you cant control volume, barely you can make good songs, the lead synth is good, but you used it a lot on the whole song, that means (user): this is boring im outta here... improve your songs so it wont be boring, also the start of the song, it has to be interesting so youll catch more audiece, good song+boring start: less audience... you could add some strings or pads to fill the song at background, putting pads or strings to the song gives the song more body, so it will sound more complete.
hope this was helpful for you.
yeah, for some reason when I converted to mp3, it cut off the lower end sounds...
I'll try to pump up the kick, and spice up the beginning a little more.
anyway, this is still a work in progress and is really just a way to show that I am not dead... I guess. What I am trying to say is that at this stage, it was more or less to get the sound out there.
Thanks for the review. it was helpful - I will add a pad but... It isn't so easy.
could you hear the arping synth at all? pm me with anything you might have to say.
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