If I had a base I would probably GTFO lol, This ones actually pretty good, the timeing of the melody and beat is pretty catchy...It fits this song pretty well. nice job.
Im a really picky person, I will tell you before i write this. The strings doing the triplets don't really mix well with the drum beat. But the beat is good. And in my opinion the note choice is not the best, but the overall song idea is good
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.