yeah dude....

i agree with mods and alternate, u basically tried to literally combine a soft ambient piece with hardcore drum and bass, it didnt work out well, but with a few tweaks i bet youll have this song at its peak. :D

I listen to this daily

That part at 1:25 never gets old, great song!

Its mellow

I like the chilled out meledies and sounds. Its pretty good but there are some things that don't blend in or forgetting.
1 - There is not bass in the song. Even in chilled liquid dnb theres a subtle bassline.
2. The hat is too loud and doesnt blend.
3. The break doesnt blend. It coould but requires some work.

Other than that is okay.

a little work

It is a very beautiful piece. However I'm not so sure about the DnB part. Firstly, the drums are too loud, and I think it was wayy too fast to be properly enjoyed, at least up until 1:30. The hi hats were definitely the loudest and harshest. Then it starts to sound much better...until 1:50 where those harsh drums are brought in again. I think if you tone down the drums significantly at those parts --in volume, and rhythm maybe-- it would fit much better.

kool

i liked it :)