I like how this starts off. Whoever did the vocals are really good at what they do. It sounds really good. At first, I was going to criticize the panning of it, but later on, it balances itself out.
I would write more, but you're going to delete it, making this review useless. Just know that you've done a good job on this =)
keep it up.
Oh yeah, one thing I dont get is the title with the song. Why is it named this?
Many thanks! Youtube's Silversoulbird is seriously an underrated singer. The song is called "I Will Win" because it belongs to a Youtube series called "The Perjurer". =)