well the whole song was well done, but at the begining you put so many effects to the voice, that gives another impression of your voice, you have a beautiful voice, but you have to get advantage of it, what i mean is that most of the audience bases how good is the song by the begining, the trick is make a good begining, so you'll probably catch more audience. hope this was useful and you understand me. you have a good future in music, dont quit, keep it up! :D
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