Whispering Death

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Whispering Death

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This is a Demo of a song I made. I am Open to constructive criticism so if you hve something to say, say it!

This is my firt song using my new recording software+drumming sampler.

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HighBallers

2011-08-02 15:34:28

nice song

at the 1:17 part \m/ hell yes

MythicTeddy

2011-07-30 17:23:14

Great song !

Love the song , great drums and guitars . The only thing is that there is nothing that kind of stood out , nothing that gets you really pumped up . Other than that excellent piece of work !

DantasticDan

2011-07-09 05:30:43

Errrr

I play in a real band.. A Post hardcore technical pop alternative band, and.. Well I'm not dissing you.. Just when I write songs I like for them to.. Pop, you know? And this just.. Didn't. I was all just pretty gummed together. Make sure you make it stand out. The only part that really did stand out was after that... Um.. what happened at 2:38? I had to turn my speakers like.. up 5 clicks to hear it.. And then the crazy guitar was like BAM and I was like D:
Make sure.. MAKE SURE You equalize your sound. DO that. Your to do list.

1. No gummyness
2. Make more things stand out.. like... A good type of "BAM".
3. try and make it sound less generic. Make it unique.
4. Alternate drumbeats a bit better
5. Add bass
6. Have fun with it. It doesn't sound like you were having as much fun as you should. Let the music flow out of you. Muted notes are fun, but don't overdo them. Play with your heart not you mind.

There's my short review ;P

(good job nevertheless)

-Daniel

coolio30 responds:

Thanks for the review! As I aid this is my firt song using my new software and is kind of a.... Prototype if you get what I'm saying. I wanted to get the basics of the software down. I'm a novice mixer so this isnt the best quality, but it's better mixed than any of the other songs I've posted. About the drums... It was hard thinking of a beat that ounded really great, so I ued a lot of double bass. And on the topic of bass, I dont have one. I would really like to get one but at this moment, can't. I may borrow a friend's just for recording.

MyamotoMusashi

2011-07-09 03:45:53

pretty good

as far as criticism, only problem I had, is a bit too much repetition and the drums need to stand out more
let me know when the full version is completed

coolio30 responds:

Is it the drums that are too repetative or just the song in general?