Cool, but sounds off tune
You open it up with that one melody, but then bring in a higher one, I suggest watching every other note (starting with the second) that the higher one hits because it just sounds wrong to my ears.
But if you iron that little problem out, I think you could have a nice sad sounding song here! Keep working :D
Yes indeed, there are here and there some notes that aren't fully correct :\...
pretty damn good
I could see this being used in submissions, a really dynamic type of song could be used in great flashs ones that take themself's serious because this is a serious song small and short but sweet this reminds me of my song "dreams( nightmare remix..again)" check it out, help a fellow audio submitter here.
damn good song.
Hmm, maybe I shouls listen that song of you then =D
It wasn't that sad to me, but there was definatly a mountain of hidden sorrows in there.
I would look over those notes for the melody man, at some places it sounds off key and a little strange.
However I did enjoy it so, it was a very effective melody.
5/5 from me Distortzion.
The melody is, without doubt, the best piece of the song.
Glad you liked it ^_^