Melody seems to be too thin, it wasn't very "engaging". The drums weren't really "hip hop" material. Usually 808 kicks are used and strung out snares. In general, I'd have to say that the song sounds empty (lacking something), though I suppose it IS a hip hop track.
Judging the overall quality, it's (once again) immaculate. You seem to have EQ-ing pretty much sorted! Keep up what you're doing!!!
at first i wasent sure but when the rap came in i was like woah this is different
The music is very clean, i like that. Although i did not like that i can almost hear the effects on the vocals...especially on the singing part. Is that a vocoder?
I think the notes are a little bit off. The samples are nice though. I really like the bells.
The main sample in the beginning, sounds very familiar, are you using FL?
Overall, i really like the intro, how the reverse kick drops into the rapping, that was the best. I think the rapping could be better. They seem out of synch sometime. Like he could stop, but he says one extra work that knocks it out of synch...its bothersome.
Good job man :D
I really liked his lyrics btw.
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