Although you need more going on in the back ground. U almost didnt even touch the bass. The whole song feels like one big intro if it led to some thing (bass solo maybe?) It would be much more enjoyable.
Ahhhhhh, shiz...My bad... ... ... ...It does sound like one big-ass intro....
....Ah, well... Thanks for the response!
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