Dis.....cud be sumfin

You need 2 make sure ure tunes are on beat coz its a lil off. You also need a bassline and some more instruments. Also make it longer cos thats kinda short as you keep repeating exactly the same fing over crackles.

Good try tho

it's iight

eh man this beat can be hot but tha thing is u gotta add more stuff to it it's get boring after a while listing to tha same thing ne wayz keep it up halla at me ~1~

damn bra

Dis can be a hot ass beat though. with all the gunshots and the people shouting in the background makes this sound good to me. Are you going to keep it this way? or are you going to fix it. Hollaz At Me.

Killah_J