As I listen through the song it gets better.....Best thing you've made eh? Rather or not it will ever be the best thing you ever make is all up to you.....I hope you keep going. Its a song like this I can see myself dancing to.
I use that too =). I'm gonna see what ZynAddSubFX is later on though.
Now about the song. You did really well with this. It kinda reminds me of the n64 bomberman beats. I don't see anything wrong with this.
Keep it up!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.