I like what you have here...
Although I can only stand the drum beat for 1 minute... After that it just hurts!
Hmm, that sucks for you. It's kind of like where you know veggies are good for you, but you don't like them, but since they're good for you you wish you did like them.
Rhythm? have it or you don't?
Most of the start didn't sound like much of a beat sadly. Then it starts to slowly sound like it might be a beat of some kind.
The drums sound very strange and chaotic to me. Almost as if someone was just banging away at random notes trying to produce a good song. Also kind of makes you think of a factory too.
The choir sounds quite pleasing anyways. Then you got a slight synth sound in there too. Then altogether it slowly forms a very chaotic beat of sorts anyways.
Overall, probably not the best you have done right?
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Naw, I thought that beat out. To me it sounds very much so like a beat, with a clear structure, it's just not your average beat.
No, it's not my best, but if I had added variations and junk, it'd be much better.
Really creepy and ominous, like the final hallway before the big boss. A really dreading, forboding feel. Your instrument choice works really well to enhance it.
The drums are a bit too loud and chaotic, they drown out the rest of the instruments. I suppose that's what you were aiming for, but turn down the drums a bit. Also, it gets really repetitive, I feel that this could probably be condensed to a little over a minute.
Keep it up!
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Not a bad piece at all, a bit messy, but that somewhat adds to the feel you were going for, something bad ass and menacing.
I feel that the title of the song works well with the actual track itself. Really well, as a matter of fact.
The rhythmics are really messed up, which fits the setting, but they do get repetitive after some time. The song in genera is a bit repetitive, though the ambient synths, what sounds like choiring in the back, keeps it fresh throughout. The high-pitched synth is really perfect for the track and the feel.
Not sure why it was put in the Video Game category, though, maybe more of an Industrial feel to it, to be honest.
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Yeah, it's really repetitive and I wanted to do more with it, but I can't work FL Studio as well as I'd like to, so it ended up being a looping thing that would be good for a video game, "OH MY GOD THE CASTLE IS COLLAPSING AND WE HAVE TO GET OUT FAST!" sort of scene.
Another thing is that the music in Yume Nikki is almost all short loops, with a few exceptions. This fact makes it even more reminiscent of the game. If you look up what Yume Nikki is, it might help you understand what this song means to inspire.