Man, I have to say,
For a first timer, this is a great work. Everything blends together, and while it doesn't really remind me of 4chan, it just worked really nicely. There is an asymmetry to the beat and how the tones blend together that I can't think of any way to describe but 'pretty'. To get a ten from me, I would say listen to some classical music and get a feel for the entrance of different elements and the synchronicity of the beats and tones, not just the two separate. I can't think of a way to make this one in specific any better, but I want to see you get straight 5 and 10 reviews. :D
Thanks a lot. I've always been nervous to post songs on here feeling I wasn't good enough, but I'll take that into consideration. As for reminding you of 4chan, the titles are just themed towards 4chan.