you must really really like the reverb effect ^^.
The intro is too long man, should cut that shorter. I know your moving through the song, changing and adding instruments as it progresses, but frankly I found that it took too long to get anywhere.
When the melody kicks in, I really began to enjoy it! And then you added even more layers to it! It REALLY began to start kicking at this point, so top marks on that.
I am quite pleased with the middle, its just that intro man, way too long.
You should add more background pads, or soundeffects.
Transitions between melodies and sounds should be looked over a bit more, using the reverse cymbol to introduce a new sound, is a damn neat way of doing it, but also consider having a normal crash after the reverse cymbols.
At one point, it got WAY too loud, have you used the compresser effect (if your using Fruity Studio's)
4/5 from me manonfire, keep them coming ^^.
Nice work i liked it alot