This is good! I like the piano and the snare that goes with that, plus the violin in the background makes a kind of sad, dramatic feel. Cant wait to hear more from you!
BTW, my finished song of Fearless is complete!
I liked it a lot, but I didn't hear any bass. Also, the melody's, I've heard them before in other songs, so its nothing new. You also need a better sounding kick-drum and clap. I really liked the song though. I voted 5!