this isnt trance dude, you lack understanding of the genre. trance isnt all about eurogates and arps. its meant to sound happy and dreamy! which this really didnt...
also you should practise your mastering.
I've always liked this one alot. It was one of the ones to survive my Zune Reset
Wierd harmonics, daring tone choises.
Original, but sounds unpolished at some points...
Plus it isn't trance. I would add it to the DnB section since this is some kind of jungle.
Damn, it clicks at some points >_<
Work on it, and good anyway.