Taking leaps and bounds.
God I just LOVE hearing these songs evolve!
You've become very powerful with the brass and strings, AND the piano going off at the same time! This is a feat I had to practice for months! It no longer sounds like a trial, but a sort of fight, still that means nothing, it sounds very nice.
And now good sir, I know you are more then capable of setting the mood with these three instruments, I think there is one last crucial step you must take in order to begin weilding some serious composition power.
You have some timpini hits here, but they seem random, and unco-ordinated, this is primarily because they don't really seem to follow a pattern, or are not used frequently or loudly enough to make a stand.
Timpini drums are better utilized at a quick pace, for slow heavy drums, use bass kicks, I feel those work better.
I hope you take that into consideration for the third trial ;).
5/5 from me again Harddrive, I promised I would begin reviewing more harshly, but you're just moving along so fast, keep them coming ^^.
I thank you for your high rating and great suggestions. As I've said before, Devastation wouldn't have been what it was without you, and I really hope this will become as great as it was. I'm in the process of getting used to percusion, and your suggestions are very helpful.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.