damn this shit is dope
all you need is sum straight up flowing in this shit to make it a 10/10
'' BABY ALL I WANT IS U ''
LLLLLLLLLLLL is fo llllllluuuuuuuuuuvvvvvvvvvvvv baby show me the luv. Sexii you realy no how to make me fall in luv dont ya.
hey i like to rap so add more and i might mail u check yo.
K Peace And Loven Chicken Grease,
This is a nice lil beat homie. I liked that sample.
The sample is great but you're missing one thing. A great beat. The kick and the lil clap just don't follow through enough to make your head bounce. Kicks always gotta be hard, and the beat itself shoulg move the melody along. Try adding some bass to your kicks with the mixer, or mixing kicks together. Mixing works wonders. Not a whole lot of options with regular FL Studio I know but you have to make do till you get better shit.
I always try to make it so it doesn't sound like FL. But you can always tell. Still, trying makes it sound better. This was still raw as hell. Just wanted to drop some more "constuctive" critism". That means useful advice homie.
Real Muthafuckin talk
MY LIL NIGGA IS CRAZY LOL YO SON OVA THA FONE I HAD TO HANG UP CUZ ITS WAS GETTIN ANOYOING BUT GOOD JOB THIS SHIT IS HOT GET BACK AT ME ~1~