uuuuuhhh question did you sing the lyrics??? i hate to be mean but you need some lessons
the music in the background was amazing but there is some eq issues whenever the vocals come in you might want to fix that. as for lyrics well in my personal opinion i thought they also sucked but thats an opinion really so that doesnt matter.
seriously though if you enjoy singing rap or singing anything really get some lessons if you cant afford lessons google how to sing or get a book on it.
anybody can learn to sing you just need to put some effort into it ok :)
The vocals were meant to sound like that all our equipment sucks tho cause we crappy equipment. Our music usually sounds better live. Until we get better equipment our music will sound like this always