Composition was okay.
The melody didn't really do it for me, although the percussion you have the grasp on, and you have an idea on how to merge into the next parts from introduction to main chorus. Id suggest working on your melodies though, and learning how to add more "Bass" to it. Now, I haven't seen any other work of yours, so I will assume this was just some fun or a practice song. But, it was a good practice song for sure. Not much else you could have done with the Demo version haha. Good-job mate.
I hadn't put massive amounts of work into the melody. It was mostly a quick, expressive song. A lot of my work is done by what others ask of me. This one was done off of what I wanted to do, and as I had said in the description, it was very late. Thanks for the review, and I will be trying to improve when I have the time and when things get fixed.
Edit: You know, I go back and listen to my songs at times, and I wonder what I was thinking when I make pieces of crap such as this one...
I'm sure there are some people out there who would like this though, and that's what I aim for. I'm not here to make music everyone likes, too many people do that. I'm here to make music for those people who don't like everything else.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.