ok where to start...
first of all... do you know what key your even playing in? some of the notes were clearly not supposed to be there.
the backing beat neeeeever changed, and as far as I can tell... there's not really a intro. The other instrustraments just came in out of cue.
music needs to flow, or otherwise it can be a real pain in the arse to listen too, you can't just throw in piano assortments and beats, and expect it to just "work".
I can't tell if this is a joke, if it is, it's a horrible one.
Everything is coordinated with the actual song. Strictly so.
And the song does fit a pretty clear form.
The song, lyrically, is clearly a joke.
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I'm not sure I find this very good. Maybe refine the melodies or just cut them out and leave a basic drum and bass track.
...This IS a basic drum and bass track. The brass instrument parts/the piano are the best parts of the song. Particularly the piano.
i get it if you're trying to make fun of modern rap, but there are more effective ways to get your point across lol.
I disagree. <.<;
How is this supposed to be good? This has absolutely no musical rhythm. Maybe it'd be good for a comedy rap but I see no description to inform me on that.
No offense, but I'd learn a little more about producing haha.
"Maybe it'd be good for a comedy rap" No description? Are you of selective sight?