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Yeah sorry accidentally compressed that last one. Here it is as it was intended to be heard (lol vinyl hipster bullshit)

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Different...

Somewhere near the end of the drum beat there's a hiccup of silence or something which sometimes throws me off. The voices seem a bit weird or misplaced, overall this piece seems to be missing something in my opinion. Maybe change up the drumbeat every once in a while? or add a new melody?

Not bad, but needs some adjustments.
-Renegated

Interesting song, just a bit ..odd?

Hey there, the song in total is interesting, it just seems (IMHO) like there is something missing.

Well the voices sound a bit misplaced, if you would add a guitar riff instead, in my opinion, it would make it a more interesting song.

Regards

I wish u did more....

It doesnt seem repetitive to me... but it just is like being lazy or doing nothing at all.. like sitting on the couch staring at a tv thats not on... that what it sounds like...

Smidly responds:

Dude, watr

.................

these things are a hit or miss to your audience.... and this was a miss

Smidly responds:

What is my audience? ;-;

not good...!

The beat doesn't match at all... I'm sorry to say this (as I normally am an optimist) but I don't like it.

Smidly responds:

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Smidly
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Jun 18, 2011
12:45 PM EDT
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4 MB
2 min 55 sec

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