I like the vocalish sound that takes center stage, it's interesting and the human touch (at least to my ear) adds some originality. I would say though that you've made this a 20 second loop when it could be a five second one. If your going to have the same section multiple times try and vary it a bit more, have some dynamic variation, or a section when some instruments drop out to keep it interesting. Very good for your first thing in reason though, that programs helluh confusing.
thx for the review, i sure do find Reason pretty confusing... xD
The loop is just a little part from a new song im working on, so stay tuned! :P