I am quite impressed!
I am quite pleased with this piece now Harddrive, you've added a lot of flavour to it, and the imagery I get are intensified by a great deal!
at 0:51 when the brass starts again, that is my favorite section (brass wise), especially at 1:02 when it plays that neat little quick tune, I was not expecting that, it worked rather well.
at 0:22 I enjoyed the brass melody falling down, as if the world around me begun to crumble.
at 1:40 when the strings are doing that little dance, again it caught me off gaurd, heh, I love being caught off gaurd Harddrive, it makes the piece more alive for me!
You have used the instruments in a way that allow for the story to be told efficiently. The brass give off an angry air while still remaining sad, whilst the strings are the ones giving the air of unbearable suffering.
Now that you have (so damn quickly I might add) pretty much mastered using more then one instrument, my next challenge to you, is overlapping both strings AND the brass! I feel adding that one final step, would make this a truly great piece.
I don't mean to self promote, but take a listen to my _=[AfterMath]=_ piece, I feel that may help you understand what I mean.
Here's my 5/5 with a great smile Harddrive, keep them coming ^^.
Wow! Thank you very much for the 5/5. I listened to AfterMath, and I really liked it. I wrote a review for it. I'm assuming that you mean for me to have both strings and brass playing in the main theme in addition to the supporting ones. I will get started on that right away! I value your opinion, and now that I know you are amazing, I value it even more! lol.
I don't know what I'll call the next Devastation, though...lol. I'll figure it out.