While I can safely say that most trance music doesn't appeal to me or that I don't listen to it casually, I do know that I can learn something different from all genres. So this is my first attempt at a trance song. The original song is called Monsoon by Tokio Hotel. I may be putting vocals in later, or expanding on it. I'm looking for some simple criticism and fair votes.
Edit: Wow, sorry for people who had to listen to that un complete POS I submitted before xD
That was an older back-up of the completed version. It's fixed now.