Potential to be greater
You've got some really great sounds in here and the beat really pulled me in at the start. Unfortunately, I found that the denouement was a little clouded and subdued. The way the beat sets you up at the beginning makes you expect some crazy melody or wall of sound, instead presenting you with a little loop.
Other than that, I would advise to work a little on the timing of integration, but otherwise it's all good. There's some really sweet samples in there and it works as a song; I just feel it could be a little more controlled. (Controlled chaos? ;P)
And I just have to say again how awesome that beat is at the beginning.
Thanks for the constructive stritisism. I'm sorry to let folks down, but I don't currently have the proper equipment to do anything without loops. I have keyboards, but no USB cables, mixing programs, but no track creators. I'm working on getting both, so just sit tight, I'll have more stuff on the way soon!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.