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Dim Lit Rooms {Frozen)

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Me and my friend started this then it just kinda sat around so I decided to finish it. It's not quite done I haven't done any real mixing or production to it but I still wanna know what I should do. I just wanna know if people think I should add anything else to it. Thanks don't forget to vote and review! And keep an eye out for when I fully finish it.
Ps my friend - http://bert-90.newgrounds .com/


Rave party in an overlarge room

Sounds like a crazy dance party in a cathedral. The reverb is a little over the top, especially with the drums at the beginning. This music is more suited to a packed room with flashing lights, and right now it sounds too hollow.

Seems a little dissonant at times, where the background suddenly shifts from major to minor key with little warning and then right back again. If you could get the rest of the parts to follow the key dynamics it would probably sound better. Could also just be me.

So, turn down the reverb, play with the harmony lines and it'll sound awesome.

M3 of the Review Request Club

lazy-dave responds:

I agree with you on the reverb and it will be changed. I know what parts your talking about with the transitions, one is intentional the other is just there kinda lol. I shall try making the transitions a little smoother too. Thanks for the review and feedback!

Too dim?

I'm gonna guess that the fact that the entire song is a bit unclear, in quality, isn't in thread with the title. I'm not sure what causes this, but it sounds like I'm standing outside of the room listening to this track.

The song has a nice composition and progression, it is carried throughout by the light synth and the drums, while the bass works as a strong force at points.

My big issue is the sound quality. If it's intentional, you should change it, if not, you should find a way to fix it.

Review Request Club

lazy-dave responds:

I shall look into that. Thanks for the feedback and review!

Too much reverb...

Yea, I think that's the main problem this song suffers from, because everything from the drums to the main synth has a bit or reverb on it that makes it pretty hard to grasp what's going on with clarity, and I think I'm going to say that the drums are the one that emphasize on this point because the reverb makes the drums seems pretty unrealistic in this aspect. I would turn the reverb down on the drums (if you know how to) or use drum synths that don't produce as much reverb.

On the good side tho, I like how the song is organized. This song doesn't seem very random, though at certain parts, I'm questioning the transition from a lighter feel to a darker feels, but I'm sure on this one that it was a artist choice more then anything.

So over, address the reverb problem, and I think this will turn out better overall.

Zel of the Review Request Club.

lazy-dave responds:

I very much agree, I didn't realize I had reverb on them until I listened to the drums alone, I've already changed them lol. Thanks for the review and the feedback!

Dance dance

Really like the flow of this beat. It sounds very cheery and kind of makes you smile as well. Really like the synth solo you put in there near the start as well. The tune just seems to be pretty awesome as well. Good work on it.

The synth sounds quite awesome and I like what you did with it. The drums sound very nice and seem to hold a very fast yet basic rhythm as well that sounds very enjoyable. The bass was very wet and remixed which sounds pretty cool to me. I think you did wonderful here as usual.

Overall, sounds really cool too.

Review Request Club

lazy-dave responds:

I'm glad you liked it! lol thanks for all the reviews SCTE3 I appreciate every single one!

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Credits & Info


3.13 / 5.00

Jun 14, 2011
11:18 PM EDT
File Info
3.8 MB
2 min 49 sec

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.