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Jun 14, 2011 | 9:18 PM EDT
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1.5 MB
1 min 8 sec
3.87 / 5.00

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Rated 3.87 / 5 stars
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Author Comments

"Clockwork Sorrow" by David Ko. Based off "Clockwork Melody" by Clark "Plazmataz" Powell

Lyrics by the unaffiliated York Bezbozny

He'll always fight to the fore
His sick beats could never be more sublime
His heart and his souls in his sword
A paradox child the hero of time

Guided by seer of mind
He faces his death without ever dying
He defends the alpha timeline
And wears really awesome shades

Kneel before the knight of time
His levels of irony blow your mind
His hair kinda looks like a bird
He will not be beaten by a game called Sburb



Rated 4 / 5 stars

Not bad

Not your best though !
Here, you really shouldn't have sung while copying the melody, cause particularly in this song, this small melody could make a perfect countermelody, and you would have gain a lot by incrustating a new melody (made by voice) over it.
This song is perfect for an ambiance, and you have free possibilities here, so don't hesitate ! Just do it, and create your own theme.

Another thing to improve, in my opinion, or which could bring a plus : in the same direction actually, a work on polyphonia. With voices it's easy to make great harmonies. I heard you did it at one moment, but it was a bit shy :)

So for me, I've got the feeling that you don't dare to make something really personal, maybe by fear of disnaturating the original, or cause you are not sure. But you shouldn't hesitate !
Take advantage of having a song in which the melody is not really pronounced and go on !