I thought you switched accounts... I'll just leave this review here.
I think you can lower the volume of the hi-hats there... And maybe cut away the whole bass part of them. Maybe making the beginning hi-hat pattern more interesting would help too.
This song needs a smoother transition to the part with electric guitars. You should try and build up slowly, maybe adding on changes one by one, rather than suddenly put fast drums and electric guitars so suddenly.
The piano might need a bit more reverb, some heavier reverb might give this the 'spooky' feel it needs.
The drums are great! I like the pattern you used. Really cool.
Oh, and some mysterious-sounding string pads would sound great on this song. It can help fill up the gaps of silence between instruments.
I decided it would be too much of a bother to switch accounts; I'm being left alone for the moment anyway (Hopefully forgotten). Seeing your review has sparked a desire to finish this song. Thanks so much for your review! (I need to go review some of your stuff. I actually listen to it often but I never wind up reviewing because I get caught up in all the awesome) xP
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