Your tracks, if you're aiming in the mainstream area I don't see the motion of your music moving in that path. It moves in the underground path. With lyrics it could become more powerful. I like the set up. A bit of advice though, try using the nobs and filters on sytrus to bring in all new sounds. That's what I do in most of my songs.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.