what up man
It's good to hear you experimenting man. There is a definate progression from your first submissions to this one.
Now the beat sounds like a preset which is cool, but I would mess with it and learn from it so you can diversify and at some fills and breakdowns.
I'm also going to give you a huuuuge secret when it comes to making any kind of music. Delay, delay, delay, delay. Mess with the delay settings and play your loop until it sounds cool.
Lastly, try automating things like the lpf cuttoff, resonance, and other mods. Keep messing around and sooner or later it will just come to you.