not bad at all!
im likin the intro and the FX,as i was listening to it it started off very well and had my attention. as i kept listening though it started rather moving from the main feel off the song,then it came back at 1:30 with a nice little transition :) ,then near 2:30 it lost me again. i think this song has alot of potential ,just try to not make it feel like its going everywhere at once.
anyways nice job on this!