Drags on a bit
I just don't feel this track, I'm sorry.
The intro is practically half the song. When the vocals actually appear, they're very low, while the bass takes over. The rhythms feel off, and I just don't like the sound of the vocals. I can barely make out any lyrics.
Did like the part at about 2.25, though, the transition, I guess, between two verses.
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There's a couple of things that come to my...
attention with this song. First and foremost, the song struggles with volume control, because there are some parts that suffer from being too loud, and some parts that suffer from being too quiet. Also, the voice seem to be a bit off time with the bass, pads, and kick that were doing a lot more for this song also with them being the best part of the song as well.
There's definitely potential with this song, and you do not need work with your pads/kick because you definitely had it down, which is a plus, but with the other stuff (also the snare), need a bit of altering to be able to fit the structure of this song. Other then that, this is a good start.
Zel of the Review Request Club.
Very long build up though don't you think? I can slowly hear the bass line picking up and starting though so that is nice to hear. Then the drums slowly come into play as well so that was good to know. The drums just play very lightly but very slowly come into the picture of the beat.
Then the full beat begins with the drums pounding and bass synth playing a good beat. Can not really hear the vocals though sadly for most of the tune here sadly. Also on a less related note this sounds more ambient to me once you take away the vocals from the mix.
The vocals come a bit louder near the two minute mark here but it is still hard to understand what it is saying. So I guess you either need a better mic or you simply need to speak up so people can hear you.
Overall, without vocals it sounds ambient. As for vocals, either speak up or get a better mic, not a bad try though.
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