Nice track here it was giving me some interest in all that you have applied to it and there was some alright effort heard in this one. Some really good sounds here and kept me interested, this was more of some unique style aswell. Not on this one, and now as we end on this one, I like what you have done here it was interesting and if theres anything to make better about it I will suggest that just below.
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And so here I can suggest a few things about your track here and I hope they help I am not the best at audio but maybe we can find some thing that will help. I would say adding some variaty of backround sounds to add to the uniqueness of it.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.