Swimming In The Clouds (MrJay)

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I at first spent over half of an hour perfecting each pattern. But soon I realized that I didn't know where the song was going, so (strange as this sounds) I let the song make itself.

I still don't think it's anything close to what it could have been, but it's one of those songs that spending another six hours would have barely improved it, and suddenly getting one little random idea would make it far better.

Rate it, review it, I've never done a song quite like this so tell me what I did wrong :)



I liked this, the piano sounded nice and the beat was good too, although there was definitely few wrong notes that you might want to check... but apart from that I liked it.

MisterJayElectro responds:

Yeah, that's probably why I don't like this one as much as others; the notes seemed WRONG, no matter what i did. Thanks for the review, always love feedback!!

swimming :)

I totally get the title man lol. and if it wasn't for that I wouldn't like it as much, good song man, I'm going to listren to your other's now

MisterJayElectro responds:

Thanks! Yeah, it actually took me a while to think of a good name.

good job!

By far, one of your best songs. I really liked the ending, good piano too. 9/10

MisterJayElectro responds:

Honestly, I don't think this is a great song, but that's just because it's a little out of my style; I was trying something I've always wanted to do, but I didn't think I could do it. To each their own, I suppose. Thanks for the review!

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4.24 / 5.00

Jun 11, 2011
11:02 PM EDT
File Info
3 MB
3 min 14 sec

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