i like the concept and the main composition but i feel you need to change the instruments your using or at least change how they sound. the second instrument isnt to bad but that first instrument im guessing is the fl guitar needs to go
thank you :) i will certainly take your suggestions in consideration
I'm having a hard time trying do determine the mood of it. Its dark but lowly, with a digital sort of sound to it.
The intro needs work, I think the siren/horn sound in the beginning is very random and out of place. This "Song" is very generic, it sounds more like a loop to me,
I recommend adding some Oscillators, or some type of grainy bass.
This has some potential, but it is very difficult for me to see it.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.