I thought it was amazing overall, the crossover worked brilliantly. I would say that it needed a little something more to bring it about as a loop, the end feels a little bit too abrupt and it doesn't flow back into the start very easily.
Apart from that, stunning.
thanks, for the nice and constructive words
Indeed i'm still working on my loop skills. Will keep it in mind for my next one.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.