Transition @ 0:45 sounded cool.
Added Melody @ 1:09 Sweet.
Breakdown @ 1:30 Wicked!
Rest and Build @ 1:36-2:08 Was cool.
Final-ly @ 2:09 Emotionally Touching - Sweet Sound.
Final-ly Touches @ 2:30 Adding to the emotional fulfillment - Sweet to the ears.
Ending @ 2:52 Smooth.
Overall, you did swell job man!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.