Hah I love dat composition!
Maybe one version just with guitar??
I really enjoy the beat and the guitar, but the vocals seems to take away from the beat. Try it without the vocals and see how it comes out.
Nicely done here...
It has a nice sound to it. People could use it in an evil moment in their flash.
On one hand I'm greatly disturbed.. On the other... I think it's really really cool... I can't decide which side is dominant, but either way.. It's an awesome song... I love the guitar at the beggining!!