But the technical side is holding you. You may need to improve the mixing on this song as through out it there is unnecessary bass, which eats up some of your leads and the some of the levels are out. Try getting it so each one is equal on the mixer :L
The melodies are spot on! The sample and lead choice is excellent! 1:20 the transition sweep was a little quite :D
Well done man! good effort
I have never been good at mixing and I agree with you that the bass sometimes is too much. Maybe the sweep is a bit quite, but there isn't any there. Just a cut-off filter. But thank you for your supportive review!
Oh my :D
I really enjoyed it, and I'm not much of a music 'technicalist', so I can't really give you any (constructive) criticisms :P
Loving it! :D!!
(Although personally, I'd like it even more if you are able to ramp up the ending of the song into a more epic, fast-tempo, 'slightly louder that the rest of the song' finale.. That's the only improvement I can think of for you 3: It is vague though, I realise, I'm sorry.)
I'll work on that! Thank you!