Needs improvement at the end
But this track doesn't deserve a score of 0.83, the intro was really good, pretty classic sounds you are using there. I think you should balance the instrument's volume a little because there are some that are louder than the others.
The ending was kinda mmmmmm predictible, you should do something unexpected, like just let those wobbles go crazy, etc.
But this is really good
Ruben -Acid Paradox-
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.