The rhythm is more bold forward in the way it sounds, its improved for certain. But the ending - the fact that it held as a soft tone for a few seconds was a sign of change in the rhythm not the ending (at least to me it was). still well made, its definitely better than my music.
yeh i didnt really work that hard on it, so believe me when this becomes full length that part will definatly change for sure.
THIS IS ok!...
Nice work! Keep it UP!