Hope you don't mind some suggestions. It starts off with a very exciting theme, but maybe that's the problem. Good mixing/sound quality also. But I'd suggest trying to hold back on entering the most exciting part of your music, and instead have a less- thrilling intro that ramps up to the faster stuff, to really "tease" the listener and build suspense. And maybe try being a little crazier with your melodies in terms of moving all around on the keyboard. Or you could try having more "breaks" in the song, quieter passages that go back to the fast stuff later. These things make the music less repetitive. Otherwise, lots of promise here.
Thanks, really good review actually... I understand exactly what you mean! thanks for pointing this stuff out :P, may help me in future projects :)
I like it!! Very Daft Punkish/deadmau5ish. Which is fucking good :P
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