Lots of low-end
This sounds to me as a LOT of low. Maybe the mix isn't that good, but it really sounds muddy with all those low sounds (or it's just my cheap-ass headset xD).
I suggest maybe adding a high synth, which cuts right trough the mix would help this piece a lot. Also a bit less distortion. Sometimes it seems like a little bit too much.
However, I really like the feel of this one. And there were some instruments for example that were just awesome. For example the bass that came in around 1:11.
you saying this sounds like its cheapsets? sounds like chipsets to me.
retro sound is NOT cheap.it's techno's awesomest instrument.
oh and by the way,the first guy who voted this piece was just a zero bomber.
but he had one thing to learn.he can't get anny voting points by voting songs >=3
so i put a 5/5 and it did 4.04.
i particularly like this piece,idk y.sounds rather original.
Thanks, I appreciate it, I'm glad its better than I think.