Pretty neat!

noisy doesn't begin to describe it X_x, this is something Satan would listen to while eating skulls and devouring the souls of the wicked with a silly straw!

It had a very cruel beat to it, however I would like to hear some variation, it gets repetitive, and I can hear the percussional work change in the background, but I can't appreciate them because the guitar distorts too much. There is of course changes in the melody but not often enough, and not drastic enough, I was imagining a rather high pitched guitar doing an insane solo on top of what you have now, wha tyou have is a very powerful foundation, you can build on it like mad.

A grand example of distortion happsn at the end where the sound is heavily warped, for sure you gotta tweak that area.

However I know that you havn't done that much heavy metal tracks, heck I know how difficult they are to master, so i'm not going to hold that against you.

4/5 from me this time DJdarkangel, keep them coming ^^.