this isn't to bad, your first upload was better. intro does need some work, its just a little bland. also i think the chords on the pad needs to be changed, cause there is a note thats being played that is off key. i would suggest finding some better drums samples for the beginning. one other thing, you might also want to put this as trance instead of Dance.
5/5 9/10 its ok! :)
Intro was terrible, Thanks god I rewind to 1:00 and hear that AWESOME leads. Realyl sound like Ibiza style of music.
5/5 and 8/10
Btw rest of song is great too but intro suck :( Try to make Side chain.